Here it is, the newly revised and hot off the press Chapter 2(remix). I’m very interested to hear what you think about it in comparison to the original Chapter 2, if you would be so kind. It is kinda long, but your time and your comments are very, very appreciated. This lovely 3 day weekend has … Continue reading
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A Mouth Full of Teeth (Ch. 2)
Today I’ve decided to share with you Chapter 2 of my novel A Mouth Full of Teeth. I’ve been putting off posting it because I’m neurotic and because I’m admittedly less confident in this chapter than I was in Chapter 1. This chapter is told through the point of view (POV) of my other main character, … Continue reading
A Mouth Full of Teeth (Ch.1)
Alrighty, since I’m feeling pretty confident still I am going to share with you the first chapter of my novel A Mouth Full of Teeth. I encourage you to leave comments; let me know what you think of it, don’t be shy! What do you think works well? What do you think could use improvement? Is … Continue reading
God Keep Me From Ever Finishing Anything
Sorry for the late posting, but I was too tired last night after the gym to anything but eat ramen noodles and watch The Hangover. Since I’m quickly running out of finished stories to share with you (I’m notoriously bad at finishing things) I’m getting dangerously close to begin sharing chapters from my novel with … Continue reading
